"ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy" (ktfright)
03/30/2015 at 18:30 • Filed to: music, rwb, rauh welt, rough world, porsche, 911, k.t.f, ktf, just blaze, hotline miami 2, hotline miami, rap, opporappers | 1 | 11 |
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Katsumoto
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/30/2015 at 18:40 | 1 |
I like the KTF - Banger.
The rest not so much. Just me that's all.
Baeromez
> Katsumoto
03/30/2015 at 19:04 | 0 |
"Bass shakes the floor / Thank god this ain't a chore" yeah had to turn it off after that.
Baeromez
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/30/2015 at 19:06 | 1 |
That first track is fucking horrible. The other two are really good, but they're instrumentals; no rap. Still good though.
ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
> Baeromez
03/30/2015 at 19:18 | 0 |
Well thanks for the constructive criticism. I needed that. As for the rest, I still equate it as fitting to the playlist, as they all had hip hop influences, and it doesn't necessarily need rap for it to be justified or be included.
ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
> Baeromez
03/30/2015 at 19:25 | 0 |
Again, no sarcasm included, thanks for your input. It honest means a lot. I thought making lyrics around that type of build of the beat would work, even as experimental as an idea like that, but I guess I missed the mark. As for the lyric in question you highlighted, why did that stand out as horrible?
Baeromez
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/30/2015 at 20:53 | 1 |
Hey, keep at it. There's no where to go but up. A very good friend of mine is a rapper and I always try to give honest criticism. On Banger it sounds like you're out of breath a lot, and I really don't dig the beat at all. Lyrically, you just need to work on your metaphors and wordplay. The message is good, the ideas are good, but if a line doesn't make you go 'damn' then find another way to say it. I honestly did turn it off after the first verse, but I went back and listened to the whole thing, and your second verse is a lot better, way better flow.
Edit: Full disclosure, I do a little rapping for fun but I'm definitely not trying to make it big. My strength is in writing lyrics and I'm pretty awful at actually spitting.
Baeromez
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/30/2015 at 20:55 | 0 |
It's a corny line, and kind of a cliche. It sounds like its just there to get from one part of the song to another, like its just filler between the more important lines.
ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
> Baeromez
03/30/2015 at 22:17 | 0 |
I don't know, I see where you're going, but that doesn't make it cliche at all. We wrote the song as if we were having a conversation of sorts. Now I'm not gonna go and shamelessly tell you you to listen to my other tracks, but music not a chore for us, as in we actually love making records.
66671 - 200 [METRIC] my dash
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/30/2015 at 22:54 | 0 |
I fucking love El Huervo after I saw his music in Hotline Miami (Daisuke remains one of my favourite songs, even though it's pretty ambient).
Baeromez
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/30/2015 at 23:09 | 1 |
I feel ya. Just checked out your channel. Dude, that Banger track doesn't even do you justice, you've got a ton of good tracks. "I don't want Venenos, I'ma pull up in that Aston." Haha, shit, you don't need my criticism.
sony1492
> ktfright | Kinja Neighborhood Black Guy
03/31/2015 at 13:33 | 0 |
Its not my kinda rap, but honestly better than 60% of that autotune rap. I'd say start off without the hook, because it probobly pushs away some crowds right off the bat.
Judging from the instrumentals,you might appreciate some Roc Marciano.